Тема: I need another reason for my persuasive essay?!?!?

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The problem with your idea (your dream of becoming a doctor) is, it is not a persuasive essay. That is a biographical,narrative, or personal essay. A persuasive essay would set out your thesis, and persuade the audience toward your way of thinking. Or, an opinion, a problem you set out a solution for. You could still include the steps you show for a plan. Just make sure to lay it out that way, not "I dream of being a doctor." That might work if you approached it from the "I want to be a doctor, but here are the problems." Then you have the problem and you write about the solution! These are very unusual prompts for persuasive essays! The instructions required this essay to be a persuasive one?

Thanks for deleting the Q while I was typing an A. Got me confused and annoyed -_- Anyway, if you re still using the hook that you had earlier, here s my take on it: Your hook (quote: "Romeo and Juliet were in love with each other, but their families didn t get along, so they couldn t be together.") is meh - not too great. A hook should grab the reader s attention and make them want to read your essay. Yours seems to dive into the material and introduce it a little, but it doesn t pull the reader in. I always used this website to help me get started (you can skip to "The Hook"): http://www.csun.edu/~hcpas003/EssayGambits.html As for the argument, I might come back and edit this to help you with that. Or I might not.

In persuasive writing, a writer takes a position FOR or AGAINST an issue and writes to convince the reader to believe or do something. Persuasive writing.